Hello Ednabel and Summer,
Leah and I love your biography about Frank Cottrell Boyce.The best feature you used was mentioning their awards because you used a whole paragraph about his awards.To improve I think you could add a bit more about his childhood like whether he was bullied or not or if he had any siblings.
Talk to you later 🙂
Tania and Leah
Hey Leah and Tania,
Thank you for all the tips and advice you gave us.
We thought it was very useful and it will help us in the future when we write another blog.
Hello Ednabel and Summer,
Leah and I love your biography about Frank Cottrell Boyce.The best feature you used was mentioning their awards because you used a whole paragraph about his awards.To improve I think you could add a bit more about his childhood like whether he was bullied or not or if he had any siblings.
Talk to you later 🙂
Tania and Leah
Hey Leah and Tania,
Thank you for all the tips and advice you gave us.
We thought it was very useful and it will help us in the future when we write another blog.
Talk to you soon 🙂 🙂
Ednabel and Summer 😉 :);)