Thank you for writing this interesting biography; I really enjoyed reading it.
I found your work visually stunning – packed with photos and bright colours! I particularly liked how you used a different colour for each paragraph because it made it easy for me to locate the different topics.
You have achieved most of your steps to success, though I would have liked to read about some emotions. For example, how did Frank Cottrell Boyce feel about school? Did he enjoy it? Also, how did he feel when he won his awards?
Dear Lexie and Kacey,
Thank you for writing this interesting biography; I really enjoyed reading it.
I found your work visually stunning – packed with photos and bright colours! I particularly liked how you used a different colour for each paragraph because it made it easy for me to locate the different topics.
You have achieved most of your steps to success, though I would have liked to read about some emotions. For example, how did Frank Cottrell Boyce feel about school? Did he enjoy it? Also, how did he feel when he won his awards?
Thanks again for your information-packed post!
Mr van Terheyden