FRANK COTTRELL BOYCE MY

4 Responses to FRANK COTTRELL BOYCE MY

1. Lorenzo and Ellie says:

   January 15, 2014 at 10:45 am

   Hi,

   Your best feature was your awards e.g Blue Peter Book Award: The Book I Couldn’t Put Down, Cosmic, shortlist (2010)

   To improve your biography,you could do your chronological order a lot better! You started doing Frank Cottrell Boyce D.O.B then went to his awards.

   From Ellie-Mae and Lorenzo
   • Michael B and Yonas says:

     January 15, 2014 at 11:06 am

     Thanks guys! I will do it in chronological order.
2. Leah and Tania says:

   January 15, 2014 at 10:47 am

   Hi Michael B and Yonas,
   Tania and I really like your blog about Frank Cottrell Boyce. It gave us alot of infomation. Your best feature was mentioning his awards, this was your best feature because you used a whole paragraph about it.
   To improve we think you could work better with your chronological order.

   from Tania and Leah
   • Michael B and Yonas says:

     January 15, 2014 at 11:07 am

     Thanks! I love the way you set out your paragraphs and I will do it in chronological order!

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