Hey Leah and Taina,
We really enjoyed reading your your lovely blog!
The good thing is that it told us lots of facts we didn’t know and we thought you used lots of dates and places.
One improvent is that you could of mentioned some of Frank’s books and awards that he won!
Apart from that tiny thing, we really loved your blog!
Hi Summer and Ednabel,
Thank you for your lovely comment.We will definately use your advice in our next blog.
Your blog is also really good.
Talk to you soon.
Hi Tania and Leah,
Your post is fun and great to read. The best feature is facts not opinions, as you included lots of TRUE things!!!:)
To improve, maybe you could’ve included more pictures. I enjoyed reading this, but thought it could do with a brighter background.
Hi, loving your work.I thought that your work was amazing, beacause you told intresting facts about Frank Cottrell boyce. I noticed that you used chronological order very well e.g. Frank Cottrell Boyce was born on the 23 September 1959.
He was born in Rainhill to an Irish Catholic family.He
attended St Bartholomews school and west park secondary.
he was an undergraduate at keble college also at oxford. As well as that, I noticed that you used dates and places well too e.g.On the 19th September2011,he co presented the papal visit
at Hyde Park with TV personality Carol Vorderman.Thankyou for such a wonderful piece of writting, I look forward to next time. From Meadow
Hey girls,
I have just read your biography and i saw lots of intresting facts about Frank Cottrell Boyce. It was really fun to read with dates and places such as Frank Cottrell Boyce was born on the 23 September 1959, he was born in Rainhill. The best feature about your biography was your facts, not opinions. To improve you could write do Frank Cottrell Boyces outstanding awards! Other than that Well done 🙂
Hey Leah and Taina,
We really enjoyed reading your your lovely blog!
The good thing is that it told us lots of facts we didn’t know and we thought you used lots of dates and places.
One improvent is that you could of mentioned some of Frank’s books and awards that he won!
Apart from that tiny thing, we really loved your blog!
Keep up the good work,
Ednabel and Summer xxxx
Hi Summer and Ednabel,
Thank you for your lovely comment.We will definately use your advice in our next blog.
Your blog is also really good.
Talk to you soon.
Tania and Leah
Hi Tania and Leah,
Your post is fun and great to read. The best feature is facts not opinions, as you included lots of TRUE things!!!:)
To improve, maybe you could’ve included more pictures. I enjoyed reading this, but thought it could do with a brighter background.
From Lexie
Hi Lexie,
thank you for your feedback on our blog. 🙂 We will use this in our next blog. We really enjoyed your blog aswell.
Talk to you later 🙂
Tania and Leah xoxo
Hi, loving your work.I thought that your work was amazing, beacause you told intresting facts about Frank Cottrell boyce. I noticed that you used chronological order very well e.g. Frank Cottrell Boyce was born on the 23 September 1959.
He was born in Rainhill to an Irish Catholic family.He
attended St Bartholomews school and west park secondary.
he was an undergraduate at keble college also at oxford. As well as that, I noticed that you used dates and places well too e.g.On the 19th September2011,he co presented the papal visit
at Hyde Park with TV personality Carol Vorderman.Thankyou for such a wonderful piece of writting, I look forward to next time. From Meadow
Hey girls,
I have just read your biography and i saw lots of intresting facts about Frank Cottrell Boyce. It was really fun to read with dates and places such as Frank Cottrell Boyce was born on the 23 September 1959, he was born in Rainhill. The best feature about your biography was your facts, not opinions. To improve you could write do Frank Cottrell Boyces outstanding awards! Other than that Well done 🙂