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This best feature i’ll say you used is Date and Places. Here is 1 example e.g Frank Cottrell Boyce was born 23rd December 1959 in Rain hill, Lanchashire, England, U.K.
To improve you should use more a little emotion. You could of added how he felt when he was young and if he got bullied or not.
Michael,Yonas
Hi Max and Kellby we really like your blog about Frank Cottrell Boyce. We think that the information was very good. You did everything in chronological order. Mabye you could’ve had more infomation about the adulthood but overall, your work was very good. We are impressed!
Hello this is Michael and Yonas. We loved your blog because it was an intresting blog about Frank Cottrell Boyce.
This best feature i’ll say you used is Date and Places. Here is 1 example e.g Frank Cottrell Boyce was born 23rd December 1959 in Rain hill, Lanchashire, England, U.K.
To improve you should use more a little emotion. You could of added how he felt when he was young and if he got bullied or not.
Michael,Yonas
Hi Max and Kellby we really like your blog about Frank Cottrell Boyce. We think that the information was very good. You did everything in chronological order. Mabye you could’ve had more infomation about the adulthood but overall, your work was very good. We are impressed!
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