Hi Hamida and Sydney,
Your post is great and fun to read. The best feature you used is mentioning books, because in this paragraph you included some humour. To improve you could use less opinion as you say Millions is highly reccommended, and I think this is what you thought. I enjoyed it also as it is bright, coulorful and fun but could do with some photos. 🙂
Thank you millions for your lovely comment! Next time when we do blogging, we will definately use your super tips to improve (you gave us really good tips)!
Hi! I absolutely love your spectacular blog because your colours, background, font and more, are extremely fantasic. You described everything so fantasicly! I would also highly reccommend your blog to the rest of the class. I have to much good things to say that will make you smile 😛 Your have a incredibly, outstanding piece of work. Yor work is way more better than I expected.
Hi Hamida and Sydney we found your post very entertaining it had a touch of humour in a thoroughly intruiging story of one man’s journey through life. You used the sturdy effect of numbers and locations to assure the reader trusts the blog. To improve you could have gave it a picture or two to assist visual learners.
Talk soon, TK & Michael C
Hi Hamida and Sydney,
Your post is great and fun to read. The best feature you used is mentioning books, because in this paragraph you included some humour. To improve you could use less opinion as you say Millions is highly reccommended, and I think this is what you thought. I enjoyed it also as it is bright, coulorful and fun but could do with some photos. 🙂
From Lexie
Hello Lexie,
Thank you millions for your lovely comment! Next time when we do blogging, we will definately use your super tips to improve (you gave us really good tips)!
Hamida and Sydney!
Hi! I absolutely love your spectacular blog because your colours, background, font and more, are extremely fantasic. You described everything so fantasicly! I would also highly reccommend your blog to the rest of the class. I have to much good things to say that will make you smile 😛 Your have a incredibly, outstanding piece of work. Yor work is way more better than I expected.
From Ting and Lily
Hi Hamida and Sydney we found your post very entertaining it had a touch of humour in a thoroughly intruiging story of one man’s journey through life. You used the sturdy effect of numbers and locations to assure the reader trusts the blog. To improve you could have gave it a picture or two to assist visual learners.
Talk soon, TK & Michael C