Hi TK and Michael C,
Your post is very good and I enjoyed reading it. The best feature was Key Events, as you encluded the main events in his life. To improve you could check it more carefully,looking for missing capital letters and full stops, use paragraphs to seperate more, amd include some pictures. I feel persuaded to read his books after reading this; you have included his well known books! Also, I understood it well because it is in chronological order. 🙂
We really enjoyed your blog; it was packed with lots of interesting key events! We think you really used your ‘Steps to Success’ to help you write a fantastic biography about Frank Cotterell Boyce. We also liked your page layout as it was a black background but had lots of colourful writting.
To improve, we think you could have more information and pictures to make you blog/biography more wonderfull, because your page looked a little bit plain, but your font was really bold and bright.
Hi Hamida & Sydney we found your comment thorough and accurate.It pinpointed the good parts but still had the edge of critisism that helps us to improve.We are now aware of our mistakes and will correct them as soon as we can.
Signed TK & Michael C
Hi TK and Michael C,
Your post is very good and I enjoyed reading it. The best feature was Key Events, as you encluded the main events in his life. To improve you could check it more carefully,looking for missing capital letters and full stops, use paragraphs to seperate more, amd include some pictures. I feel persuaded to read his books after reading this; you have included his well known books! Also, I understood it well because it is in chronological order. 🙂
From Lexie
Hello TK and Michael C!
We really enjoyed your blog; it was packed with lots of interesting key events! We think you really used your ‘Steps to Success’ to help you write a fantastic biography about Frank Cotterell Boyce. We also liked your page layout as it was a black background but had lots of colourful writting.
To improve, we think you could have more information and pictures to make you blog/biography more wonderfull, because your page looked a little bit plain, but your font was really bold and bright.
You did a very good job!
Hamida and Sydney!
Hi Hamida & Sydney we found your comment thorough and accurate.It pinpointed the good parts but still had the edge of critisism that helps us to improve.We are now aware of our mistakes and will correct them as soon as we can.
Signed TK & Michael C