Hey Brooke Henley and Namatayi,
We found your blog really intresting and fact filled! It was STAR quality.
We loved the QUICK FACT and the fact that you moved the paragraphs in diffrent sections rather than keeping it in one huge block.
One improvent is maybe you could add a little emotion. We know it is hard but we think your extremely capable of doing it.
To Namatayi & Brooke Henely ,
Hey this is a fabulous piece of work its very very intresting and helpful to use if you need it . Your pictures are very helpful and your blog is very colourful !! You incredibly defeted the steps to success with amazment they are quiet hard . It is good to know that you know lots of information and facts about him and what his done also you had enough time to put pictures in. To improve you could of used some more emotional language and next time maybe try to get it all in one straight line so its in chronological order . By the way we liked your quick fact ! From Mia & Brooke Hunt
Hey Brooke Henley and Namatayi,
We found your blog really intresting and fact filled! It was STAR quality.
We loved the QUICK FACT and the fact that you moved the paragraphs in diffrent sections rather than keeping it in one huge block.
One improvent is maybe you could add a little emotion. We know it is hard but we think your extremely capable of doing it.
Keep up the STAR quality!!!!
Summer and Ednabel
To Namatayi & Brooke Henely ,
Hey this is a fabulous piece of work its very very intresting and helpful to use if you need it . Your pictures are very helpful and your blog is very colourful !! You incredibly defeted the steps to success with amazment they are quiet hard . It is good to know that you know lots of information and facts about him and what his done also you had enough time to put pictures in. To improve you could of used some more emotional language and next time maybe try to get it all in one straight line so its in chronological order . By the way we liked your quick fact ! From Mia & Brooke Hunt