Frank Cottrell Biography by Ting and Lily

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4 Responses to Frank Cottrell Biography by Ting and Lily

  1. Brooke Hunt & Mia says:

    Me and Mia think its very intresting and there is fabulous information on here that comes in very handy. It tells us about all the awards that he won , books that he wrote and lots of other things . To improve maybe next time use some feelings and emotion also maybe add one or two pictures. 🙂 your blog is very good might need it one day. Thankyou for taking our advice its very kind to share this . xx Brooke Hunt & Mia 🙂

    • Ting and Lily says:

      Hello,
      Thank you for enjoying our information. We love the way you let us know that you absolutely enjoyed it :D! We would love to hear more about our blog from you spectacular girls 😛 Next time we will use some advice you gave to us.

      From Lily and Ting xx

  2. Lexie says:

    Hi Ting and Lily,
    I think your post is very good and interesting. The best feature is mentioning awards, as thre is a whole paragraph about it and it was easy to get to because you have sub-headings. You could improve by putting some pictures e.g. of the books he has written. I think that you have included the key events in his life and lots of interesting dates and places. 🙂

    From Lexie

    • Ting and Lily says:

      Hello Lexie!
      We were absloutely amazed that you loved our blog. Thank you for enjoying our blog.
      by Ting and Lily xx

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