Hi Brooke and Namatyi,
I love your post as it is so bright and colourful!!! The best feature is paragraphs because you have spread them round. To improve, you could put a picture if Frank Cottrell Boyce in, it would help know who he is. I knew how to get to specific places as you put in sub-headings, which wasn’t even on the ‘Steps to success’ list! 🙂
Hi Brooke and Namatyi,
I love your post as it is so bright and colourful!!! The best feature is paragraphs because you have spread them round. To improve, you could put a picture if Frank Cottrell Boyce in, it would help know who he is. I knew how to get to specific places as you put in sub-headings, which wasn’t even on the ‘Steps to success’ list! 🙂
From Lexie