Hello,
We really liked your blog about Frank Cottrell Boyce! We absolutely loved your ‘did you know ‘ fact.
Your blog was as outstanding as a professional author! To improve you could put a little bit of emotion!
But you did do a really brilliant blog!
Hi Mia and Brooke, its Maxwell and Kellby.We especially liked your blog because it was very colourful and it intrigued us. You used lots of amazing facts that kept us reading!you could use more emotion because you did not use alot but overall it was a fabulous peice of work which we both admire.
see you soon. Max and Kellby!!!
Hey! I love how your work was spaced out. You told intresting facts about Frank. Maybe you could improve your spelling.
Overall your work was brilliant.
Hey Mia and Brooke Hunt,
We loved reading your blog! It was so lovely to read!
We loved the fact that you used different fonts, colours, boldness…
One improvent is maybe you could use some emotion in your work to make it even better than it is right now. eg.How did he feel at this point or at that point.
To Lily & Ting ,
Thank you for comment on the blog it’s very helpful and good to know that you like it and we will take your advice and use some more emotion next time . Just to let you know we really liked your blog .
From Brooke & Mia
To everyone who commented,
it is good to know that you all think our blog is intresting and helpful because we like all of yours too! We will try to use some emotion and check our spelling next time . Thankyou . 🙂
From Mia & Brooke Hunt .
Hi guys! We really like your biography.To improve don’t put your success criteria in the middle of the page.
But the infomation was wonderful. you did not write about what inspired frank to become a writer.
Hello,
We really liked your blog about Frank Cottrell Boyce! We absolutely loved your ‘did you know ‘ fact.
Your blog was as outstanding as a professional author! To improve you could put a little bit of emotion!
But you did do a really brilliant blog!
by Lily and Ting
Hi Mia and Brooke, its Maxwell and Kellby.We especially liked your blog because it was very colourful and it intrigued us. You used lots of amazing facts that kept us reading!you could use more emotion because you did not use alot but overall it was a fabulous peice of work which we both admire.
see you soon. Max and Kellby!!!
Hey! I love how your work was spaced out. You told intresting facts about Frank. Maybe you could improve your spelling.
Overall your work was brilliant.
Namatayi and Naomi
Hey Mia and Brooke Hunt,
We loved reading your blog! It was so lovely to read!
We loved the fact that you used different fonts, colours, boldness…
One improvent is maybe you could use some emotion in your work to make it even better than it is right now. eg.How did he feel at this point or at that point.
Keep up the good work!!!!
Summer and Ednabelxxxxx
To Lily & Ting ,
Thank you for comment on the blog it’s very helpful and good to know that you like it and we will take your advice and use some more emotion next time . Just to let you know we really liked your blog .
From Brooke & Mia
To everyone who commented,
it is good to know that you all think our blog is intresting and helpful because we like all of yours too! We will try to use some emotion and check our spelling next time . Thankyou . 🙂
From Mia & Brooke Hunt .
Hi guys! We really like your biography.To improve don’t put your success criteria in the middle of the page.
But the infomation was wonderful. you did not write about what inspired frank to become a writer.
By Philip & Lamonte